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Por JGkZqeYUVDgHgnpqs
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Hace 2 años

/ Hmmm. Perhaps you're right. I had originally inentded for Seph to stab him in the shoulder, but there's lots of big flat bones there, and an actual -through the shoulder- stab would require much explanation in the way of scraping and slipping through, and that was simply too annoying to write.But I may have been just slightly too hard on Cloud with this one anyway. Plus, you know, it's dreamstate pain, so I guess I can claim irreality points there. :P Still, it needs work in any case, and the rest of the chapter is far from done. Thanks for the crit. Much appreciated, as usual. :)


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